Matt Bellamy

Wow, this thread is very old, and ver off-topic. I don't think it was ever really on topic. So, I'm locking this (especially since the picture isn't even there anymore). ...

Exactly, Imaginative! I get so bored after writing the first few scenes of a novel, this way it feels like every time I go back to my story, I'm starting ...

I've recently started writing my new story, aka novel attempt #247. xD The thing is, I'm writing it a bit weird - instead of writing it from beginning to end, ...

Hey! I like that you've added more imagery to this. One thing I would change is "hurry, save the last bit that lingers!" to make it sound a little less...dramatic, ...

Zomg, awesome pic of everyone, Mesh! :D Whee!

Mistakes in time like Scribbles in concrete Careless sweeps and Scuffed footprints. Memories are more than Names written on Dust-covered table tops, But like etchings on wood In permanent marker. ...

Hello! Firstly, sorry if I say anything which is repeating anyone else; reading other people's reviews deterrs me if they've already said what I was thinking. The first stanza is ...

Its 9pm in the UK.

One of my first reviews, posted on 8th December 2004: Good. Not really my thing, but I specifically liked the last two lines of the first stanza and the last ...

I'm glad there's only one. I mean, if there were male and female toilets, I don't know which one I should use. o_O

Save it. Or spend a little and save loads of it. You never know when you might need it.

I am overwhelmed by my greeting skills in this thread. If you ever greet anyone, remember my post above - I have most certainly set the standard.

badbadz - marry me?

I really like the description in this and the images it puts in my mind. However, who is "he"? He is only mentioned once, is he important? The second stanza ...

I love how you formatted the words at the beginning to look like stairs! Also, the slow progression of describing the character. It is very difficult to write in second ...